{"id":8318,"date":"2014-04-16T15:03:47","date_gmt":"2014-04-16T19:03:47","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.beliefnet.com\/columnists\/beginnersheart\/?p=8318"},"modified":"2014-04-16T15:03:47","modified_gmt":"2014-04-16T19:03:47","slug":"poetry-structure-and-creative-beginners-heart","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.beliefnet.com\/columnists\/beginnersheart\/2014\/04\/poetry-structure-and-creative-beginners-heart.html","title":{"rendered":"poetry, structure, and creative beginner’s heart"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Last night, discussing structure and writing with my elder son, I said I couldn’t write w\/ too much structure. That writing is — for me — a discovery process.\u00a0Structure<\/em>, I told him,\u00a0can actually kill my ideas<\/em>.<\/p>\n

Later, as \u00a0I lay in bed half-asleep, I thought about poetry. And realised that what I said was only true of prose (at least for me). \u00a0I write most easily (and possibly best) when I have the structure of a form. \u00a0Sonnet, haiku, tanka, lune ~ each draws forth the content to fill the form’s formal structure. They act like scaffolding for \u00a0my creative process.<\/p>\n

Kind of like using the right tools to crack lobster… \ud83d\ude42 Sure you can use your hands. But a claw cracker and tiny fork make it soooo much easier.<\/p>\n

The more I thought about it, the more I realised: structure is a kind of mindfulness. It’s almost meditative. Certainly it’s contemplative. If I have to fit the inchoate feelings\/ images\/ thoughts within to a skeletal framework, it’s almost like magic — following the breath to calm. A kind of practice…<\/p>\n

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I think creativity often responds beautifully to structure. But what seems like structure to one person may be torture to another (my son’s process sounded antithetical to my own), and our own methods may well not even feel like ‘structure,’ they’re so deeply internalised.<\/p>\n

Once, at a workshop, I heard the Pulitzer prize-winning poet Henry Taylor talking about his struggle to stay a ‘working poet’ while he fought brain cancer. Taylor said he did clerihews<\/a> — a form invented at the turn of the 19th century. They were all he could manage, he said. But they did the trick: helping him keep poetically nimble.<\/p>\n

When my days are full of scullery duties, or enrapt with my grandson, and poetry seems (even for me) almost too much, I turn to haiku. Haiku are my practice, the way clerihews were Taylor’s. And it’s because of both forms’ structure that they work as practices. The form allows the mind to work on the content, not wondering about things like line breaks. At least, not so much. \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n

\"national<\/a>So today’s poem is a clerihew (even though I’ve been practicing haiku… \ud83d\ude42 ) The clerihew is for my grandson, who will (I hope!) grow up to love poetry.<\/p>\n

Holding Trinidad Gildersleeve,<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0I’m inclined to disbelieve<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n

That paradise requires<\/em> death.<\/em><\/p>\n

It’s in my arms, and drawing breath.<\/i><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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